Monday, 4 November 2013

Prompt 2

On a lovely sunny morning William and his brother Tj went to the Palm Springs Beach for a surf but when they got their there was so many people on the water so then they went and got their towels and laid down on the sand, but then they heard a loud voice saying “ Help help help” so then they ran and looked for the person who was saying help.

Suddenly they heard the voice again and they started to run as fast as they could and then they saw the man who was in pain and that man who was in pain was their friends Dad he was court under a Big big broke.

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