Best Writing term 1 2016

My Best Writing term 1 2016

First tennis lesson
Recount writing

On a lovely hot sunny morning straight after the bell rang for the ending of morning tea Room 7 all got into there SPX P.E shirts because of we were having our first kiwi sports for the year of 2016. Our kiwi sports for this is tennis I am really stoked to learn some new tips with our instructor James.

It was finally time for our tennis lesson so hurried to the courts so we can get started. As soon as we walked into the courts we all said “good morning James” then we were told to get one racquet from the bag and one tennis ball from the container. After we got our tennis gear we were instructed to hit the ball on the flat side then hit it again on the steel frame of the racquet

Suddenly James told us to find a partner my partner was Patrick then we had to go to a tennis net and start practising our hits, Patrick and I are very good. Then we went into a game 1 on 1 tennis. We had to get in pair of fours so we can versus the other players on the other side of the court. Our team with Motu , Anthony, Samiuela and I won our first few games to patrick's team, meanwhile James told us to come in so we can learn how to overarm serve in tennis so then we gave it a try, it was was pretty easy put all we needed to do is practise on our timing.

Time was almost over and it was time to play a quick game, around the world tennis it was are difficult game but I gave it a try. We had to hit the ball and run to the other side of the court but if you do a mistake then we are out I was part of the four survivors but then I went out with patrick and it was only Alecia and Richie left in the game and they are the two winners for our around the world game.

Sadly our tennis lesson with James had finished so It was time for us to go, we all said “thank you James and Goodbye”.

I think this is  a Good Piece of writing because of it has

good punctuation

Good Vocabulary and good spelling

Screencasify maths

Learn: I learnt to screencasify my learning

The Easter Story.

This is my move about The Easter Story. Hope you enjoy.

MY AUTOBIOGRAPHY 2016

Soul Friend Writing term 1

Soul Friend Day at St. Pius X

Today is Soul Friend Day at our school. A Soul Friend is a person that you look after, comfort and share ideas with him or her.  It’s like looking after a little brother or a little sister.

My soul friend is Xavier he is a new student attending SPX,  he loves to read  books, he loves to play around with his friends, he is a very smart child and I hope he will become a future leader for SPX.

It started in Ireland then It was introduced by the holy faith who started our school 58 years ago. It was a beautiful relationship, where the older student look out for the younger ones.

We look after each other, we share our lunch with one another, we go to church together, we share what we learnt in class to each other and we do everything for each other.

Fr Douglas and Jesus: Venn Diagram

Learn: I am learning to compare what Fr Douglas did that is similar to what Jesus did.

Outstanding. Badge of Honour 2016

Structure of Narrative Story

Badge of Honour
Learn: To Identify the structure of a Narrative for Badge of Honour

ORIENTATION - Where did it took place: When did it happened:  Who is ?in the story Where did it took place: At school When did It Happened: On a sunny day Who is in the story: Tomasi, Fai, Isaac, Mrs Latu, Jesse and Richmond.

COMPLICATION - What is the problem? That they know that Tomasi has been fighting after school and Fai might tell Miss Latu put Isaac doesn’t want to tell because of they are best friends.

SEQUENCE OF EVENT - Plot -  What happened in sequence?  You can bullet point the main events. the 4 student received their badges Isaac was nervous After they received their badges Isaac and tomasi were walking home Tomasi received a phone call Isaac could slightly hear their conversation Isaac heard the word fight at the Park Tomasi ended his phone call they carried on walking. Tomasi was walking a little bit faster than Isaac Isaac said to tomasi what’s the problem Tomasi told Isaac that he has to go to the fight because of they are waiting for him Isaac tried to stop tomasi from going to the fight but tomasi didn’t listen and carried on walking. Next day Isaac was looking for tomasi he was sitting with the boys at the back he went to tomasi He saw tomasi, Tomasi eye was blackened and swollen Isaac touched it Tomasi said he fell of his skate board. Isaac could see fai and Mrs Latu coming from the corner they were walking faster and faster Tomasi was panicking he told Isaac to stick up for him but Isaac had nothing to say

RESOLUTION - How was the problem solved? The problem was solved when fai told on Miss latu and Miss latu came and talked to tomasi

CONCLUSION: I think tomasi should have listen to Isaac and don’t go the park for the fight.